BOOK EXCERPT: Andrew Klavan’s ‘The Long Way Home’ (The Homelanders) — Part 1
by Andrew KlavanCharlie West went to bed one night an ordinary high school student. He woke up a hunted man. Terrorists are trying to kill him. The police want to arrest him for the stabbing death of his best friend. He doesn’t know whose side he’s one or who he can trust. With his pursuers closing in on every side, Charlie makes his way back to his hometown to find some answers. There, holed up in an abandoned mansion, he’s joined by his friends in a desperate attempt to discover the truth about a murder he can’t remember-and the love he can never forget.
Chapter One
The Killer In The Mirror – Part 1
The man with the knife was a stranger. I never saw him before he tried to kill me.
I was in the Whitney Library when it happened, about seven miles from my hometown of Spring Hill. I’d been there for about forty-five minutes. I had come with a plan—a plan to clear my name, to get free, to get home to my family and out of danger. Now I had to leave. It wasn’t safe for me to stay in any one place for very long.
I was in the main research room on the library’s second floor. I went down the hall and pushed into the men’s room. I took off my black fleece and hung it on the door of one of the stalls. Then, wearing just my jeans and black t-shirt, I stood at the sink and splashed cold water on my face.
I was tired—way tired. I had been on the road—on the run—I don’t know—several weeks—a long time. I had to fight to stay alert. If I didn’t stay alert, I wouldn’t stay alive.
I dried myself off with a couple of paper towels. I looked at myself in the mirror. The guy looking back at me was six feet tall. Thin but with broad shoulders, good muscles, still in good shape. I had a lean, kind of solemn face with a mop of brown hair flopping over the forehead. Brown eyes—serious eyes—probably too serious for a guy who was only eighteen—but honest and straightforward. At least, I always thought they were…
I shook my head. Snap out of it. This was no time to doubt myself. I had to keep my spirits up, keep going. Never give in.
It was hard sometimes. I have to admit it. With the bad guys after me, and even the good guys—the police—after me too. It was hard not to get discouraged. Lonely. I missed my home. I missed my friends. I missed my Mom and Dad. I even missed my sister, who could be very annoying, believe me. Imagine sitting down to watch your absolutely favorite television show and just as it’s about to begin, a nuclear explosion wipes out all of civilization as we know it—that’s how annoying my sister could be. But I missed her anyway.
I missed just being a regular guy, just going to school and church and hanging out and doing regular things.
But it was no good thinking about that now. I had to keep going. I had to do what I’d come here to do. I’d promised myself I wouldn’t stop trying. I’d promised God too. And I wouldn’t stop. Not ever.
I turned away from the mirror. I took the fleece down from the stall door. I’d bought it at a thrift shop a few days ago. Something to keep me warm now that winter was coming. I tapped it to feel the papers folded up in the inside pocket. That’s what I’d come to the library to find. I had what I wanted. It was time to go.
I slipped the fleece over my head, working my arms into the long sleeves.
It was just then—just as I got the fleece on—that the man came in.
He was a little older than I was—in his twenties maybe. A bit taller and a bit bigger around the waist and shoulders. He was wearing black jeans and a red windbreaker. He had a round, clean, pleasant face. Blonde hair, blue eyes. He looked like a nice guy. He gave me a quick nod as he entered and I nodded back. Then he moved past me, heading toward the urinals at the far end of the room.
I took a step away from him, toward the door, ready to leave. As I went, I glanced over at the mirror to check myself one last time. I lifted my fist to my reflection by way of encouragement. Never give in.
And, as I did that, I caught a glimpse of the man behind me. I saw his reflection too, out of the corner of my eye. Strangely, he had stopped walking toward the urinals. He had pivoted around, back toward me.
Suddenly, without any warning at all, he had a knife in his hand. It was a killer’s knife, a combat knife. A seven inch blade of black steel.
At the very moment I spotted him in the mirror, he tried to plunge the blade into my spine.
A jolt of terror went through me, an electric panic that gave me almost supernatural speed. I leapt to my left, turning sideways. The blade lanced past my midsection, so close I felt its motion through the fleece. My years of karate training kicked in. I reacted without thinking, smacking his elbow with my left palm to push the knife hand away.
But I was moving so fast, in so much fear, I stumbled, tripped over my own feet and staggered back deeper into the bathroom.
That saved my life. Because the man with the knife was well-trained. He knew how to fight. He was already slashing backwards at my face. If I hadn’t stumbled away from him, he’d have cut my throat right there.
I let out a grunt, bending away from the blade. I still didn’t have my feet under me, and the movement sent me even further off balance. I fell, tumbling down to the floor.
It was the end of me. I was sure of it.
Part two of this two-part excerpt runs tomorrow morning.
“The Long Way Home” is the second book in Andrew Klavan’s Homelander Series. He discussed the series and the first book, “The Last Thing I Remember,” with Big Hollywood back in April. You can read that interview here and here.
“The Long Way Home” is now available at Amazon.com.







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BH needs to get its email program fixed. I wanted to email this to a teen I know who liked AK's other YA book, but the "image verification" kept failing even though typed exactly as shown. Anyone else having this problem?
I read "The Long Way Home" in one sitting after the UPS truck delivered it from Amazon. I couldn't put the book down. This series just keeps getting better and better! Although it is sold as "YA", if you enjoy reading thrillers or mysteries at all I know you'll like this one.
Best. Villain. Ever. Talk about "the banality of evil"? This was no cartoon bad guy, but the real deal. Wow.
I just tried it, it's definitely broken. I think it's the whole thing that's broken though, not just the verification.
I didn't even know the second book was out yet. The first was wonderful — I can't wait to read this.
andrew
i dont want to read anything that will spoil it. i just jumped to amazon, one clicked and my 13 year old daughter will be very stoked that there is a new one. she loved the first one and gave it to a retired vice admiral who also loved it, now that is a wide audience. thankx
Loved the first book. Can't wait to read this one
My daughter bought it Sat at Barnes and Noble, finished it Sun, night. I think she could of read faster but we spent 3 hours at church and then we went to gmas for the Super Bowl party. I started it last night, at 1:00 am and am having a hard time getting anything done. And I homeshool. Love it so far, and we are both glad we only have to wait till Nov for the next book. Thanks, Andrew!
She may enjoy this, it is quite could be a little disturbing for an 11 year old. Read it yourself and see what you think. My 21 year old loves. My 17 year old boy did not want to. Now that the second one is here he asked if the other one was around. Yes, it is still here.
would a 11 year old girl get hooked on this? my daughter doesnt read, not interested in any harry potter or snickety nickety… i barely got her to read some of oreilly's kid book, she's an A student, basketball first pick & dance freak but reading… nada… though we read the Avatar-native indian gang warfare articles on here. thank you guys!
and i'm a pjtv member too! cuz of klavan & zo!!
I was able to get a 13 year old hooked on these books, when reading was not what he wanted to do. One of my rules for buying books is that it must be discussed after being read. I told his mother that she should read it also in order to discuss the story with him, she did because it was the grown-up thing todo, I am not sure who was more excited to read the 2nd book when I brought it over to their house. Thank you, Mr. Klavan.
I also bought the first book, but after finishing the final chapter I felt that a conclusion was not to happen. As much as I enjoyed it, I refuse to purchase this series anymore. I'm not in the market for another "24" styled read.
I grew up with novels that had a beginning, middle and end and found it trying (to this day) an effort to finish the Lord of the Rings trilogy. I loved the Foundation novels but here's the spin on it. Each where complete stories with the hints of more beneath. 'Ghost' continued on into new adventures in the art of killing muslims and other toady bad dudes, but the first and onward where Complete stand alone stories. You could start with the last one published, but you might miss out on the texture of the environment. Again though you didn't need what came before it to read that last one.
Good luck to you sir, you're a great writer and when you make a complete novel I'll be the first to purchase it.
Call me a heretic but… it's okay not to read, so long as she *can* read.
This idea that everyone has simply *got* to love novels is a rather… novel… concept, really. It's very recent. Some people simply don't get into novels, but they might prefer other reading such as magazines or non-fiction. I know that my sister doesn't like to read unless it's informative so she likes magazine articles. Me? I don't like to read unless it's a novel, and generally a *fun* novel, and even better, if it's a *fat* novel.
That said… she might be engaged by mysteries where adventures bore her, or by "boy" novels. My favorites when I was her age were Hardy Boys (not Nancy Drew… and I'll admit that the Hardy Boys didn't age all that well) and later John Carter of Mars and Tarzan. By the time I was 13 I was reading Ian Flemming (James Bond) and all the romances in the school library (not something I'd recommend for a young girl, at least not those old ones because the power relationships were really wacked even if there wasn't any sex in them.)
She might like the sports books I hated.
My 12 year old didn't really get into reading until she found the Warrior (cat) books by Erin Hunter. http://www.warriorcats.com/warriorshell.html
Patricia Wrede's Enchanted Forest series (Talking to Dragons, etc) is wonderful.
Oh… and I managed to forget to say more *explicitly*… if she doesn't like the kid books she's exposed to, she may very well like something like Klavan's books a whole lot better.
Really looking forward to this!
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